I am choosing Ted Mosby as the year of the
person.
He was born April 25, 1978. He is from Ohio. He
graduated from Wesleyan University.
He became architect. After his best friend, Marshall Eriksen, gets engaged with Lily, Ted decides to find his
soul mate. He is so romantic and sincere. He always waits for the one that he believes as his real
love. Although he thinks that he finds her, he can’t find her easily.
Also,
he is so thoughtful. When he sees his friend’s sadness, he does everything to
make them happy.For example, when Robin learned that she can’t have child, he
prepare this:
I am nominating his because of his characteristic. He is one of the nicest person I have ever seen.
He thought happiness as having a lovely wife and sweet children. That was the side of him I like
most.
Hello Seda :)
ReplyDeleteI like this guy like you. I like your general patern of writing. Because you have mentioned about his role and his caharacteristic traits, I admit that I like him much more :) He seemed to me as if he was the best guy in the world :) Generally , I like your entry ,but I want to say that I have found out some mistakes in your grammer. For example , instead of '' the year of the person '' , it should be the person of the year . In addition , ''when Robin learned that she can’t have child '' is should be reorganized.Because of the noun clause the second part should include ''could'' instead of ''can '' .Furthermore , ''I am nominating his because of his characteristic.'' in this part it should be '' I am nominating him '' . Despite these mistakes , I really like your writing style. I am looking forward your another entry :)