Love Me If You Dare
I want to mention about a love movie ‘Love Me If You Dare’. Briefly the
movie is about best friends Julien and Sophie. They continue the odd game they
started as children -- a fearless competition to outdo one another with daring
and outrageous stunts. While they often act out to relieve one another's pain,
their game might be a way to avoid the fact that they are truly meant for one
another. Actually I watch that movie to cry some. But this movie is different
from other love movies. Movie maker wants to show us the love’s another side. Julien
and Sophie don’t seem like they love each other, seem like friends that playing
weird games. But we can understand that they love each other so much at the end
of the movie. I don’t like movie maker’s ideas about the film’s ending, because
I want a happy life for them. But I like movie maker’s effort to show if the
film ends with happily what will happen.
It is very nice entry. It draws my attention. I know this film from a turkish song "Bilinmeyen Saat Uygulaması" by Cüneyt Ergün. I haven't watched this movie but I was impressed so much when I watched just the clip of the song. I am glad to share with us and remember it. The entry's content is very romantic and ,in my opinion, it is interesting but your expression is shorter than I hope. You should express your feelings about this video. In addition to these, I cannot say a lot of things about your grammar. You use it well, however, the sentence 'actually I watch that movie to cry some' seems like wrong to me. I think you should represent what you mean better. You were feeling sad when you decided to watch this movie and want to cry a little but this sentence is shortfall in my opinion. In last sentence also you couldn't give what you want to say. I cannot understand it totally. Despite of your little mistakes, I love and enjoy your sharing. Thank you for your efforts. :)
ReplyDeleteThis comment has been removed by the author.
ReplyDeleteDear Seda,
ReplyDeleteI liked your ideas about the film and I totally agree with them. I also watched that movie and liked it as much as you did. You explained your ideas quite well. However, there are a few things I'd like to remind you of :) Firstly, you don't need to write "about" after mention, we use that verb on its own. Secondly, you'd better not start the sentences with "but", it is not very proper. One more thing before the last, since love is not a living creature, you'd better write "another side of love" instead of " love's another side". Finally, you shouldn't use relative clause and reduction together as in "...friends that playing weird games.". You can remove "that", or you can add an auxiliary verb between "that" and "playing". By the way, I wish you chose a scene from the movie instead of the trailer, that would be much more attractive. Except these, your work is very good and I liked the movie you chose :)